How did Charlie strike you? Did you enjoy Little Cricket's maturation?
Charlie is a pretty typical college -ish student. . .though perhaps more loyal than many. Certainly cares for the Cricket.
The "helper" bees carry this section. Did you expect the juxtapostion of minor chracters into major events?
I don't think about that too much. . . .just as long as it makes sense, which it must have because there weren't any "what the heck is he/she doing here?" moments.
When did you guess the real identity of the the two train passenger's from Kansas?
I knew they were baddies and was trying to tie them to someone we'd met before but didn't peg the names until the vision from the damaged painting.
I know there was a bit of drama and mixed genres in this section, but I had to give you a bit of ninja intrigue and also some downright murder. Since The Jade Owl series was conceived as a "livig" museum, with relics and objects taking a life of their own - were you surprised at the finality of the Tale of Moe?
Only thing more apporpriate would have been if it'd been used on Gyllenhall. . . . .
We saw the tears of Guan-yin work in The Jade Owl. How do you suppose these tears of Guan-yin actually work? And can you speculate on their relationship with the paintings. If not, don;t worry - there's full disclosure in The Dragon's Pool.
Clearly they're laced with penicillin and aspirin.

Seriously. . . .does it matter how they work. Some things, perhaps, are not for us to understand. More things in heaven and earth, Horatio. . . . . .
Fire, mayhem, bike rides, Italians driving out of control, warehouse ystery and a battle with carton boxes. Did is fulfill your aspirations for an action sequence?
it was definitely the most action intense section yet.
Finally, do all the pieces fit when Little Cricket presents the last sister to Rowden Gray? What piece is still flapping in the wind?
I'm sure they do. . .but I'm still a bit mystified as to what will happen next. So. . . on to Part VI