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« on: January 31, 2011, 05:06:00 PM »


   
EYE OF THE WIZARD


"A great, fun little romp. -- Red Adept Reviews

"Wildly entertaining." -- KindleObsessed.com



They're misfits... but they're the only heroes around.

From the author of Song of Dragons comes Misfit Heroes -- a fantasy series about creepy monsters, underdog heroes, and epic adventure. For all ages.

BOOK ONE: EYE OF THE WIZARD

Shadows prowl the night. A dark warlock musters power. Evil lurks in every corner. The world needs heroes. What they get... is a few misfits.

A couple failed squires. A jinxed wizard. A banished spirit of the forest. A childlike demon and her teddy bear. They are outcasts, failures, oddballs.  They might just save the world.



Buy from Kindle US -- $2.99

Buy from Kindle UK -- £2.17

SILLY INTERVIEW!  Two characters from Eye of the Wizard--Neev (a wizard) and Romy (a goofy demon girl)--visited the blog From the Shadows recently.  They caused some major havoc.  Take a look.

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« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 05:47:16 PM »

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Swords, Spells, and Skeletons!

These are a few of my favorite things.

Congratulations, Daniel! Looks great.  Grin
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« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 06:07:12 PM »

where'd the cheetos go?
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« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 06:29:21 PM »

where'd the cheetos go?

I know you like the puffy kind:


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« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2011, 07:56:29 PM »

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« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2011, 01:31:57 AM »

Ohhhh

That is a beautiful cover.

Best of luck with it Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2011, 05:04:27 AM »

Thanks, Keith!
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« Reply #7 on: February 04, 2011, 10:11:10 AM »

So buying at lunch!  Good luck with it Smiley
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« Reply #8 on: February 04, 2011, 10:47:53 AM »

So buying at lunch!  Good luck with it Smiley

Thanks, Arkali!  You've read Firefly Island, right?  I hope you enjoy Eye of the Wizard, too.   Cool
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« Reply #9 on: February 04, 2011, 01:54:05 PM »

Actually, have no... :blush:  Nor Flaming Dove.  For some reason the cover of FI just never grabbed me >.>  I DO have TGoD, (oooh... wild) and hopefully will read it soon.  I meant to read it this week, but my Daddy fell and broke his hip Tuesday so after finally getting back to town last night I'm horribly behind.  Bah!  But soon, soon, soon Smiley
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« Reply #10 on: February 04, 2011, 02:59:11 PM »

Actually, have no... :blush:  Nor Flaming Dove.  For some reason the cover of FI just never grabbed me >.>  I DO have TGoD, (oooh... wild) and hopefully will read it soon.  I meant to read it this week, but my Daddy fell and broke his hip Tuesday so after finally getting back to town last night I'm horribly behind.  Bah!  But soon, soon, soon Smiley

I hope your dad gets well soon!

No worries about Firefly Island.  I'm probably confused because often when people buy one of my new books, they tell me, "I've read Firefly Island, so I'll grab this one too."  I think either The Gods of Dream or Eye of the Wizard are good books to start with; the former is long and more serious, the latter is a light and quick read.

I've been thinking of asking my artist (the same one who created the covers for The Gods of Dream and Eye of the Wizard) to create a new Firefly Island cover.  If I do, it'll be the fourth cover Firefly Island has had!  I sold the book to a small press years ago; they commissioned artwork from a lovely artist named Stephanie Law.  Five Star Publishing printed the hardcover and gave it new artwork.  The current ebook version has the novel's third cover. 
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« Reply #11 on: February 04, 2011, 03:08:01 PM »

Hi, Daniel :-)
Thanks!  I actually just got off the phone with Daddy and he's sounding MUCH better today, like his old self.  He's 90, so I was pretty terrified Tuesday when mama called.

Anywho - the FI cover is nice looking, but it just does nothing for me and makes me think Sci-Fi, so, umm... yeah.  Never picked it up, even though I KNOW it's a fantasy book.  Go figure.  I'm really looking forward to reading TGoD, though.  Sadly, I'm so behind now with classwork, which has put me behind with editing stuff...  vicious cycle.  Grrrr.
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« Reply #12 on: February 04, 2011, 04:29:28 PM »

Hi, Daniel :-)
Thanks!  I actually just got off the phone with Daddy and he's sounding MUCH better today, like his old self.  He's 90, so I was pretty terrified Tuesday when mama called.

I can imagine.  Scary stuff.  I'm glad he's doing better!

Anywho - the FI cover is nice looking, but it just does nothing for me and makes me think Sci-Fi, so, umm... yeah.  Never picked it up, even though I KNOW it's a fantasy book.  Go figure.  I'm really looking forward to reading TGoD, though.  Sadly, I'm so behind now with classwork, which has put me behind with editing stuff...  vicious cycle.  Grrrr.

Here is the cover from the hardcover.  What do you think?
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« Reply #13 on: February 04, 2011, 05:21:27 PM »

Arenson = Buy

Loved Flaming Dove.  Firefly is on my TPB.  I've been really swamped with school, but I'm back to reading now.

Look forward too this Daniel.
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« Reply #14 on: February 04, 2011, 06:06:46 PM »

Sweet cover art. Looks like a nice story too!
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« Reply #15 on: February 04, 2011, 06:20:55 PM »

Thanks guys!

And Eye of the Wizard just received its first Amazon review -- for five stars.  That was fast!

Here's a quote from the review:  "...if you are looking for a fun read with loveable characters and an entertaining story at a great price, this is a book worth looking at.  For me to give 5 stars is rare but in this case I felt that the entertainment to cost ratio made it 5 star worthy."

You can read the full review here.
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« Reply #16 on: February 04, 2011, 08:20:09 PM »

I can imagine.  Scary stuff.  I'm glad he's doing better!

Here is the cover from the hardcover.  What do you think?

Thanks!

Well, hrrrm.  In some respects, the older cover is better.  It communicates the genre better, for one thing.  BUT - it's dated looking.  The new cover at least looks new, but it gives a totally wrong impression of what you're getting.  Hope that makes sense?

Oooh!  Forgot to add - 'grats on the five-star! Smiley
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« Reply #17 on: February 04, 2011, 11:04:03 PM »

Well, hrrrm.  In some respects, the older cover is better.  It communicates the genre better, for one thing.  BUT - it's dated looking.  The new cover at least looks new, but it gives a totally wrong impression of what you're getting.  Hope that makes sense?

Makes sense to me.  Smiley  The current Firefly Island cover was inspired by George R. R. Martin's fantasy covers.  For example:



While I love George R. R. Martin's work, I think my cover is better than his.  Shhh.

Oooh!  Forgot to add - 'grats on the five-star! Smiley

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« Reply #18 on: February 05, 2011, 09:28:51 AM »

Makes sense to me.  Smiley  The current Firefly Island cover was inspired by George R. R. Martin's fantasy covers.  For example:

While I love George R. R. Martin's work, I think my cover is better than his.  Shhh.

Thanks.   Cool

I HATE that cover.  Truly.  I'd be willing to bet that's the later cover.  Let me go look...
Not sure which cover came first, but I definitely prefer this one:
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« Reply #19 on: February 05, 2011, 09:44:42 AM »

I HATE that cover.  Truly.  I'd be willing to bet that's the later cover.  Let me go look...
Not sure which cover came first, but I definitely prefer this one:


I think that one (with the illustration) came first.  Not sure why they changed it.  But one thing's for sure:  I can't wait to see the mini-series.
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« Reply #20 on: February 05, 2011, 03:26:21 PM »

I think you're right about the cover order.  And I don't know why they changed it, either.  I definitely think it was a step backwards.  Totally agree that the TV show is probably going to be awesome, though Cheesy  Do you know when it's supposed to start?
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« Reply #21 on: February 05, 2011, 04:32:41 PM »

I think you're right about the cover order.  And I don't know why they changed it, either.  I definitely think it was a step backwards.  Totally agree that the TV show is probably going to be awesome, though Cheesy  Do you know when it's supposed to start?

April 17!  Get your HBO ready!

http://www.hbo.com/game-of-thrones/index.html

I've seen some of the trailers and "behind the scenes" videos.  You can find them on youtube or the HBO website.  It looks very well made.

George R. R. Martin has definitely inspired my writing.  I first read A Game of Thrones in 1998, when I was 18 years old, and it changed the way I thought about fantasy literature.  It was dark, gritty, and un-romantic.  It hasn't inspired Eye of the Wizard, which is a lot lighter and more whimsical, but I do see GRRM influences in the current novel I'm writing.

By the way:  Two characters from Eye of the Wizard--Neev (a wizard) and Romy (a goofy demon girl)--will be visiting the blog From the Shadows on Tuesday.  They're going to wreak some major havoc.  Neev is going to (try to) interview Romy, and both characters will be answering questions from the blog's readers.  If you're on GoodReads, you can RSVP here:  http://www.goodreads.com/event/show/108256
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« Reply #22 on: February 06, 2011, 06:31:01 AM »

Daniel, what do you think of Martin's style of rotating the POV around a large cast of characters? I really like it and have been using a similar style in my own books, but I know some readers prefer to stick with one character throughout an entire story.
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« Reply #23 on: February 06, 2011, 06:44:49 AM »

Daniel, what do you think of Martin's style of rotating the POV around a large cast of characters? I really like it and have been using a similar style in my own books, but I know some readers prefer to stick with one character throughout an entire story.

All my novels have strict, third-person POV, which rotates between the main characters.  Firefly Island follows this style, too, even though I wrote it before reading George R. R. Martin.  Head-hopping is a pet peeve of mine; I don't read books with head hopping, and I dislike the ominiscient narrator. 

In all my novels, I choose four or five character to be my POV characters.  Secondary characters don't get this status.  I choose the most important, interesting characters for POV rank, and make sure they're distinct -- by gender, age, personally, etc.  Between chapters, I alternate between these POV characters, and tell the story from their head.  Even though I write in third person, it's almost like a first person experience.  The reader sees the world through the POV character's eyes, hears through his ears, knows only what he knows, experiences his emotions, can read his thoughts... and is never allowed to leave his mind.  The reader can never hear/see/smell/sense anything the POV character isn't experiencing, or know anything the POV character doesn't know.  There is definitely no head hopping, whereby I suddenly show you what another character is thinking, or show you something that's not inputted via the POV character's eyeballs.  When I want to switch to another POV character, I end the scene or chapter, and can start with a new one.  I'm careful to use this style in all my novels.

Eye of the Wizard has six POV characters.
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« Reply #24 on: February 13, 2011, 11:16:34 AM »

New five star review for Eye of the Wizard on Amazon.com.

Here's a quote:

"Eye of the Wizard offers a delightful opportunty to get lost in an hilarious world where the reader's expectations of fantasy novels fade and are replaced with chuckles and giggles. Arenson displays consummate skills and timing from chapter to chapter, without fail. Five stars is a perfect rating for this work, and I was disappointed that my numerous clicks on the page failed to make a sixth star appear."

Have you read Eye of the Wizard yet?
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